eyes like lanterns
carried us through the darkness
i turn to see you wave
a goodbye -
i curse the night
Thank you very much to the Poetry Palace for this award.
I nominate mirror mosaic of sounds for the next award.
January 22, 2012
Looking back
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January 28th, 2012 at 4:06 pm
You chose the short form too! ;D Nice one, I can feel the longing…
January 29th, 2012 at 4:49 pm
Glad you stopped by
January 28th, 2012 at 6:31 pm
beautiful, thrilled to see you.
January 29th, 2012 at 4:49 pm
Thanks!!
January 28th, 2012 at 9:15 pm
awww… I just wrote a fairly sad piece so this hits home. Sad, but lovely.
January 29th, 2012 at 4:48 pm
Thanks for stopping by
January 30th, 2012 at 11:26 pm
Being apart from a.special person sucks, good write.
January 31st, 2012 at 7:45 pm
Thanks
January 31st, 2012 at 1:22 am
What a sad feeling this poetry brings, but also something mysterious.
January 31st, 2012 at 3:10 am
That first line is just powerful and simple! Great write!
January 31st, 2012 at 7:45 pm
Thank you